Hi Cruze, I really liked the way that you have retold this story about Goldilocks and the three bears. I can see a beginning, middle and end from the way you used a sequence of events that took place. This is a great way to practice writing your own stories. Well done, from Mrs Carter.
Hi Cruze,
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way that you have retold this story about Goldilocks and the three bears. I can see a beginning, middle and end from the way you used a sequence of events that took place. This is a great way to practice writing your own stories. Well done, from Mrs Carter.
Thank you Mrs Carter
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